Frying pan mosh pit, oil bubbles searing like Vesuvius at midnight, perpetual frothing lava like a diseased rabies ridden dog. The infected air juggles sinisterly in the hot gargling rush of the unnatural searing. They push and shove; and I watch the survival of the fittest molecule, seeing them scream within themselves as the smoke rises impatiently. I breath it in, afraid of allowing it inside myself, but still getting drunk on the blistering oily smoke, watching my glasses cloud with vapor. Outside the pigeons frantically pick at bread crumbs, their eyes twitching and heads turning like an epileptic child. The flutter of their speckled wings craze over eachother, nibbling and quivering, elbowing one and other with their entire bodies. The pedestrians wait on the speeding cars to give them way, sometimes not waiting for the light to turn red, because the mosh pit inside their heads tells them otherwise. They trip over the pigeons that fight amongst eachother in their silly little mosh pit and rush home to watch oil bubbles erupt in the celebratory mosh pit of the frying pan. The Mosh pit inside my head gets drunk on the Mosh pit upon my stove as I watch my glasses cloud with immense vapor.
Exquisite… you’ve really captured the contained energy, bubbling away.
mosh pits everywhere…definitely inside my head way too often….Thank you for this gift momina
You’re very welcome David!
And I have always been fascinated with the whole concept of a mosh pit. It is so sick and free.
well…I will tell you this…A mosh pit is about as close to a “hive” mind as you can get
it makes me wonder what you were frying…great energy ~
haha nothing special. The oil bubbles were just popping insanely. So I thought I’d write about it haha
I envy you – I wish I could translate my thoughts as beautifully as you do.
Thank you! And you write beautifully as well. It’s just a matter of unlocking your brain more frequently when writing so that the thoughts are more raw and translucent.
and now,
the crowded morning subway car will never be the same.
what a ride it’s gonna be!
I never know what you’re talking about but I do enjoy the stories you come up with parallel to my own. hahaa. Thank you Steven
your welcome Momina. i do so enjoy your writing!
and i’m not sure what i’m talking about either especially after the pouring rain stops.
Excellent. Every line is quotable. Eloquent, funny …
thanks for old stirring thoughts of push-moshing i almost forgot
David in Maine USA
Momz, kaisay karti ho?
I fall in deep, every time I read something of yours.
Thank you Amn
I’ve had a burst of creativity during the past few months and I hope it lingers for a while! Depth is often found in the most intricate and mundane occurrences of life- there’s so much connectivity. it’s after I realized this that I was able to achieve fluency with my writing